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Tuesday, September 16th, 2014 09:57 pm
Here's the first of the S3 bingo ficlets! This is for The Mind's Eye square, and is a bit of Janet POV from Legacy. What do you when you can't trust your own perceptions? 420 words, rated G.


Twisted Senses

As a doctor, Janet applies all the tools of her trade to measure and assess her patients' conditions, from a manual thermometer to magnetic resonance imaging. She wields neuro navigation as expertly as her stethoscope, comparing official baseline to current reality and determining cause and effect. She is grateful to be a doctor in an era when so many instruments are available to help her save lives, even if the overwhelming complications of alien diseases and damage inflicted by otherworldly weapons will sometimes leave her scrambling.

But for all the computerized machines and sophisticated instruments at her disposal, Janet values her own human senses more than anything else. She knows that what some would call "intuition" is actually the slow accumulation of years of experience and observation, allowing her to connect the dots and recognize what others might fail to perceive. With the benefit of having seen so much before, a sharp gaze and a probing hand can often discover what routine testing might overlook. Particularly in the fraught atmosphere of Stargate Command, when so much of what they know (or think they know) simply doesn't fit with the bizarre reality of their everyday lives, Janet listens, watches, breathes in the scent of pain or unease or distress until she knows what to do to help her patients heal.

But this time... This time, her senses are failing her. There are voices in the room, but they sound like they're underwater. Her clothing prickles as the temperature soars until she gasps for breath, tearing at her collar. It's the Goa'uld, she knows it is, they've coming for her and -

"Janet!"

She looks up and cowers back, seeing Sam's eyes take on that demonic glow, hearing the menace of her phlanged voice.

"You're a Goa'uld!" she whimpers. "Stay away!"

Sam is still speaking, the ugliness of that echo in her voice failing to mask the urgency, and Janet struggles to listen. Her ability to think coherently is failing her, just like everything else. There is a tiny part of her that is urgently whispering, reminding her that Jolinar is long gone, that Sam is still a friend.

But her mind, seeing only a confused and twisted landscape, insists otherwise.

Despairing, she gives up on sound touch taste sight smell. She can only fall back on pure instrumentation now. That's what Sam is asking about, Janet forces herself to recognize. Blood types, plasma, centrifuge...

She chokes out what instructions she can, then curls into a ball, waiting for the horrors to stop.
Tuesday, September 16th, 2014 09:58 pm (UTC)
Janet is love! And this is a wonderful Janet POV! She really did come through and save the day...!
Friday, October 3rd, 2014 10:25 pm (UTC)
I may have suggested a cracky explanation of this, once upon a time...

And a most excellent one it is!

Dear god, I miss Janet. And killing her off in "Heroes" had a lot more to do with "gynophobia" than it did with bringing home the money plot. If TPTB had really wanted to show us that War Is Bad, why not send Bregman and his team through the Gate and have Bregman killed all dead? That would certainly have had as much punch [I mean, assuming TPTB were actually capable of writing a decent script, which .... no], and it would have preserved Janet for future eps. Which was clearly no priority for them...
Saturday, November 1st, 2014 12:30 am (UTC)
I think the actual proper sacrifice in this ep would have been Bregman, in terms of punch and of preserving the core regular cast, which honestly, was a finely-balanced machine before this happened. I think I read once that Mallozzi handed Teryl the script cold, saying he thought it was the best writing he'd ever done and she'd love it. And then she reads it and finds out they're killing off her character... *sigh*
Sunday, November 2nd, 2014 05:54 pm (UTC)
Yes. Yes, he was. The world misses Mr. Davis, and the Gateverse misses General Hammond.